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Mabel had always had strange fantasies, ever since her father had first had the sex talk with her. She had her pick of boys throughout California and Gravity Falls, but it was the men in her family that she had her heart set on.
(This is just simply filth you guys, these are fictional characters in fictional scenarios, please don't come for meeee)
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15 Jun 2026
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Out of Her Dreams by AnonymousSummary:
Mabel had always had strange fantasies, ever since her father had first had the sex talk with her. She had her pick of boys throughout California and Gravity Falls, but it was the men in her family that she had her heart set on.
(This is just simply filth you guys, these are fictional characters in fictional scenarios, please don't come for meeee) -
I'm Young, Naive, and Really Miserable by mediocreShakespeare
Fandoms: The Owl House (Cartoon)
26 Jan 2026
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TO GROW WINGS pt. 1
Since the moment Luz ran away from everything she knew, Eda has been there. She’s her teacher, her protector, the only adult in her life she can really trust.
Luz is growing up faster than she ever wanted. It’s hard to stay a kid when you’re fighting an evil emperor and trying to get back home. And luckily, Eda understands. Eda doesn’t push her away once things get hard, like her mom did. She doesn’t tell her she’s too immature for her age. She actually listens. And what’s even better is that Eda actually LIKES her the way she is now.
Maybe a little too much.
("Reaching Out" until the end of S2, but Eda and Luz develop an unhealthy relationship. Eda is selfish, lacks self control, is grooming Luz, and Luz romanticizes the situation to cope)
Note: This fic is about grooming and how it affects the victim's mind. This is NOT smut, and rape scenes will be non-pornographic. There are also references to other forms of sexual abuse, but none of it is sexualized or romanticized. Read and write what you want, AO3 was made for that. But if you're looking for smut or darkship content, you won't find it here.
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- Part 1 of To Grow Wings
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18 May 2026
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Absolutely amazing work, hits close to home, DO NOT READ WHILE SPIRALING, !#Her
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I'm Young, Naive, and Really Miserable by AnonymousSummary:
THE ROTTEN ONES pt. 1Since the moment Luz ran away from everything she knew, Eda has been there. She’s her teacher, her protector, the only adult in her life she can really trust.
Luz is growing up faster than she ever wanted. It’s hard to stay a kid when you’re fighting an evil emperor and trying to get back home. And luckily, Eda understands. Eda doesn’t push her away once things get hard, like her mom did. She doesn’t tell her she’s too immature for her age. She actually listens. And what’s even better is that Eda actually LIKES her the way she is now.
Maybe a little too much.
("Reaching Out" until the end of S2, but Eda and Luz develop an unhealthy relationship. Eda is selfish, lacks self control, is grooming Luz, and Luz romanticizes the situation to cope)
Note: This fic is about grooming and how it affects the victim's mind. This is NOT smut, and rape scenes will be non-pornographic. There are also references to other forms of sexual abuse, but none of it is sexualized or romanticized. Read and write what you want, AO3 is your oyster! But if you're looking for smut or genuine darkship content, you won't find it here.
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If light is always the answer, every road leads back to Luz.
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Rewrite of the initial scenes from Watching and Dreaming from Amity's perspective.
Amity fights off conflicting thoughts that tell her to hurt Luz. Only to realize she has been puppet the entire time.
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Lost Girl on the Boiling Isles - Season 1 by JadesEvolution
Fandoms: The Owl House (Cartoon)
10 May 2025
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Amity Blight is a human who finds herself transported to the Boiling Isles after sulking in an abandoned shack during a storm. She meets Eda the Owl Lady who helps her become comfortable in her skin and live out the magical fantasy she always wished to have while on the Boiling Isles.
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- Part 1 of Lost Girl on the Boiling Isles
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21 Aug 2025
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Cons: First, second and third chapters are very messy. Characterization is all over the place, and the trans main character feels shoe-horned in instead of natural. Storytelling is very 'tell, don't show'. Main character is supposed to be Amity Blight, but she doesn't FEEL like Amity Blight. Instead she feels like a different, inconsistent, character, who happens to have the same name. By chapter six I am a bit bored of the story. Not because it is slice of life, which I love, but because with how tell-y the narrative is I have zero immersion. Nothing grips me, nothing makes me eager to experience the next event in the story, I am just told ''THis happens'' and I acknowledge 'Yes, that happened' and move on. No emotional investment at all.
Neutral: Pacing is middling. It is neither phenomenal nor terrible. Minor accordioning.
Pros: Spelling and grammar are on point, with only a single error in the whole first decent-length chapter. Premise is not unique, but is setting up that it might be done well. Immediately upon starting fourth chapter the quality seems to have jumped up. It's still very tell-y, but much better than the previous three chapters. THis bodes well.
Notes: Getting better by chapter six, but still very tell-y. Reads a little like the script for a movie, with each sentence being a statement of action (''Eda did this. Luz went there. Amity felt that.'' ect...) At this rate of improvement, I think somewhere around chapter fifteen it will be more show than tell. I wonder if the wordsmith is new to the craft? If so, this is an incredibly impressive beginning.
Overview: I was not impressed with the first through third chapters, but the seeds of possible greatness are there. I still look forward to seeing if this story blossoms into greatness.
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This was so not a good idea.
Amity hoisted up the roller like a briefcase and ran up the steps, pushing at the door and slipping inside.
Without delay, Amity knew she’d just done something very, very wrong.***
Trapped in a strange and terrifying world, Amity must navigate the choppy, deadly waters and find her way home—the human realm.
If only she could trust the strange and mysterious witch who promises to get her there.Bookmarked by THorniestmax
16 Aug 2025
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Excellent pacing and construction, Wordsmith is kind and enthusiastic, low number of typos, long chapters that feel short because of how good they are.
Top-notch story.