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I've noticed at lot more AI generated fics recently, possibly just because of what I've been reading. But when I go to the tags, they aren't identified as Gen AI (no "AI-Generated Text," "Created Using Generative AI," or similar tags). And when I go to the comments, there's almost never anyone pointing it out. Experience (commenting about it in a compliment sandwich "this-is-fun-maybe-tag-for-AI-can't-wait-to-see-where-it-goes") has taught me that part of the reason for this may be judicious comment deletion, which, fair enough.
But I don't like AI. For lots or reasons, of course, but here particularly I just literally do not like reading its writing. Because it doesn't write well.
These two things together cause a bit of an issue... because AI fic is crossing my screen more and more often and filtering it out isn't particularly effective.
So, how do I identify AI work?
That's what this guide is for!
To start detecting AI use, it's helpful to know how AI works. The generative AI models used for writing are actually LLMs (Large Language Models). They are immense blackbox algorithms which tokenise words and produce text by calculating the probability of the next token. These models are fed a ton of data (at this point most of the Internet) and then refined by human trainers.
The token and probability part is why AI couldn't (can't?) count the number of 'r's in 'strawberry'. The algorithm can't split the word token (in this case 'strawberry') into letters and instead uses the probability of the next word to declare the number of 'r's, often 'two'. The human part is how AI ended up favoring 'delve,' because trainers for that model mostly spoke Nigerian dialect English, where delve is more commonly used.
Notably, these algorithms aren't operating at 1, or 100%, probability. If they were they would produce the sort of text loop you can generate by repeatedly using predictive text (on your phone keyboard, for example). In order to get both randomness and sensibility, model creators add controls like limiting the token pool (top_p) and/or probability (~temperature).
(The terms in parentheses are actually ChatGPT use terms, so they are midpoint modifications at best. For example, temperature is actually inverse of probability and goes up to 2. The base probability limits of the models are closely held secrets; these terms are for tools used to modify those modifications.)
But that probability function, which is inherent to LLMs, is what makes Gen AI work identifiable. To other algorithms, yes, but also... to you!
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AI detectors use many metrics, but the most common (and public) are perplexity and burstiness. Perplexity measures how unexpected each next word is (basically back reading the probability used by the LLM), whereas burstiness measures variability, generally of sentence length, structure, and... perplexity. Gen AI is generally more consistent than humans, so these measures work pretty well.
(Personally, if 500+ words from a narrative chunk of text score 99% or higher likelihood of being AI generated on GPTZero, I don't bother with the rest of these steps. I test GPTZero with my own work, recent public pre-existing AI examples, and mixed works fairly regularly. But I also only go to GPTZero if I'm already suspicious--in general, never purely rely on an algorithm.)
The problem is that these tools largely work the same way LLMs do (they are blackbox algorithms), so more recent Gen AI versions have intentionally increased their perplexity and burstiness. Luckily not to near-human levels (potentially impossible), but enough to further the AI vs AI detector arms race.
But you DON'T work the same way a LLM does. You can spell, you can count letters, and you can understand language beyond the probability of a collection of words.
So how do you detect AI?
For this guide, I split my methods into two kinds of measures: linguistic and contextual.
I like to call my favorite linguistic measures weird and what??. Weird and what?? also work because of LLM's reliance of probability, not by using probability but by using your linguistic understanding.
Weird is the identifier of when the probability function has done a one to one swap that doesn't make sense. Personally I catch weird instances most often (at least consciously) with fingers. I guess whatever probability these models are set to has 'fingers' a little to close to 'hand' or maybe 'palm', because only in AI generated work have I seen something like 'he pressed his fingers against the window'. In that context you imagine just the fingertips pressing against the glass of a window, which is.... weird. But there are lots of one to one swaps that read as just a little off, that AI generates because it doesn't actually know what it's writing. (Presumably there are even more without the training phase, which means you can't get too comfortable with any one weird point because it could be trained out at any time.)
What?? is the identifier of when the probability function's swap has ripple effects, when it's done a one to 'too much' swap. The number of question marks increases as the weird goes off the rails. for example:
- the stream gurgled - normal
- the stream gurgled like - weird
- the stream gurgled like a kid - what?
- the stream gurgled like a kid hearing an icecream truck - what???
Instances of what?? are sort of just a stronger example of weird, except they end up breaking implicit language rules more often.
In my opinion, this happens because LLMs are designed to not always choose the most probable next word, but some words basically only occur in combination with each other (the stream gurgled cheerfully); so the next most probable option sounds crazy. And that crazy option increases the probability of a continued phrase that makes even less sense from the starting point. Which is how you end up reading some truly strange sentences.
But weird and what?? are just the linguistic measures. You (as a non-LLM) have more than just your learned understanding of language to help you identify AI generated text. You also have your understanding of the world!
My contextual measures are how many?, how?, when?, who?, and again?. At least those are the most common.
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As previously mentioned, LLMs can't count.
(AI in general (the more recent models) can, because they are actually lots of different models grouped together, including one or more math models, but LLMs, the models that do the writing when a prompt requests it, cannot. And while AI does check its own work (the AI people interact with is a bunch of statistical models in a trenchcoat), its not very good at corrections beyond grammar (which it also isn't always great at).
And when an 'author' has no idea what numbers are or how they work, much less the context in which they exist, it's going to use some crazy numbers. You might notice numbers of things changing, count-downs out of order, way too many people in a room, things being incredibly odd prices, and so on. This is how many?
How? is more about contextual details (again, AI doesn't 'know' things). So someone might point at something with a finger while wearing mittens (example from user miles_to_go), block shots on goal as a forward, or suddenly end up sitting down on the other side of a room. These can be less obvious, because real people do make this kind of mistake a lot, but AI gets absolutely egregious with it.
Like describing someone being careful to not overmix a roux. In narratives and recipies, people tend to worry about overmixing recipies with wheat flour (the most common flour in English-language cooking and baking), so it generates someone worrying about gluten structures in a fat suspension (implied).
Similarly, people tend to stand up at the end of conversations (so they can leave). Which means sometimes an LLM generates a sequence where two people walk into a room, then one of them stands up, walks across the room, and passes too close to the other person in the doorway on the way out. AI doesn't 'know' how people move through space and it can't keep track of where they are; so it sometimes implies they can teleport.
How did she do that?
When? is a bit of a mix between how many? and how? And it's a bit misleading of a name...
You've probably heard that Gen AI often 'hallucinates' false information or facts. This also happens in narrative AI generated text. If you're reading a story and the narrative consistency is really very lacking... well, that's an indicator. This can be events changing (something being in a different place in a flashback, like an apple that was on the counter being in the fridge) or a sudden change in status (a taped pair of glasses suddenly having a loose screw). I call it when? because what? is already taken and I honestly end up asking myself when did that happen? or when did that change?
Who? does a lot of heavy lifting, because in AI generated text there's lots of reasons why you might find yourself asking it.
1) Gen AI isn't great with consistent pronouns in general (because it doesn't 'know' character gender or other context (for more complicated pronoun languages)) but it is especially bad in... unusual? gender situations. This is the probability thing again, statistical likelihood combined with the general data used for training. If the pronouns for a character change from 'he' to 'she' for just the one paragraph discussing 'his' feelings for another 'he', unremarked upon by the author... well, LLMs are trained on mostly straight romance (so the probability is that 'she's will like 'he's), mostly cis he/she binary characters, and mostly women in skirts, et cetera. So AI is more likely to suddenly use sterotypically correct pronouns instead of actually correct pronouns. Who is she?
2) Gen AI cannot keep track of conversations. For a bunch of algorithms that love snappy back-and-forth dialogue, their unknown to us inner workings are very bad at making that dialogue make sense. Characters will have to have spoken twice in a row, in separate lines, without a silence indicator for the other speaker(s), for both the beginning and end of a conversation to make sense. Part of the confusion is also that AI tends to let dialogue float, leaving it without specific character references (he said, she said) or framing actions (He refused to turn towards her). Who said that?
3) Gen AI is so vague. All the time. The specifics of the probability models mean that even when they are describing things in ways that are weird and what??, you still probably won't know the color or height or texture of anything. People, on the other hand, love describing things, particularly people. Especially in fanfiction, authors love to mention the hair and eye color of the main characters. Side characters usually get an identifying feature or two, a tall reporter or purple-haired waitress. AI generated works often have featureless masses moving through featureless spaces, probability smoothing away almost every detail. (I have many thoughts on this, obviously.) This honestly also contributes to when?, how?, and how many? as well, but I think this lack of context can be most evident when it comes to characters as opposed to settings or actions. When there is description, it's often 'like' something or 'that' something or 'so' something or 'which' something. Who is that?
Finally, again?. Again? is my least favorite of the contextual measures, because it's the most annoying to have to ask and the closest to actually just being another linguistic measure.
Generative AI is repetitive (it's a probability problem). It repeats both general grammatical structures and specific words and phrases in a way that gets very grating very quickly. The most annoying structure (to me) is the very short sentences in sets of two or more. Three, again and again, is the worst (ex: ("She focused on her desk. On the book. On the class."). Honestly the prolific use of one-to-three word sentences in general is not great, but when there's a set every other paragraph... no gracias.
(AI writing also just has a lot of choppy sentences generally; unedited Gen AI narrative writing rarely has good flow (in a modern sense). Probably because of the lack of variation in structure and length and word-choice allowed by, again, the probability.)
The specific phrases can change a lot from model to model, but you can usually find a recent list or twenty. My current least favorite is the overuse of "not a threat, but a promise", especially in dialogue. Sometimes a certain string of words hits that probability-and-trainer-approved sweet spot and pops up everywhere, and sometimes it's less specific and thus more long term... like the not x but y dichotomy. You're saying this again?
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Now you might be thinking that these measures could all end up with more false positives for second language or inexperienced authors. And you would be right! That's why, for a single instance, you make a note and then keep going. It takes a critical mass of instances to write off a work.
(You can also check to see if they've mentioned writing in a non-native language or just starting to write etc, but those groups can and do also use Gen AI.)
It helps that there's a largely distinct accent to AI that most inexperienced and second language authors just don't have. This is something that's easiest to identify with experience (I suggest filtering a fandom to before 2021 and then reading a lot of works). However, this is the identifying AI guide, so I'll try to explain it a little.
Second language authors are weird in a fairly consistent way, because it's generally a result of them defaulting to a grammatical structure or common idiom from their first language. This is more obvious in translated works (of course), but especially early on in language learning, a lot of what you are doing is internal translation, so it's still very prominent. The best example of this is probably in idioms, because a directly translated idiom may make very little sense without the correct cultural context. But it will make very little sense in a different way than an AI generated idiom.
I think this is a mix of the surrounding context helping support an idiom and the fact that even unfamiliar (human) idioms usually have familiar (human) sentiments (ex: "by the end of the night he'd fought off not one stray dog but ten wolves---three men make a tiger"). AI generated idioms are often dropped in without context and feel hollow (ex: "a beat that sings"). Also AI usually prefers similes, it loves "like".
In general, I've just never read a translated or second-language original work with the cadence of AI generated text. They will have an unusual cadence, because of the grammatical structure differences, but it won't read like AI work. It's just a writing style/author's voice like any other. (Please let me know if you have a better way to express this.)
There might be who? pronoun issues, but it just doesn't really happen in the same way/context as with AI (unless it is machine translated, because MTL also uses LLMs).
Inexperienced writers, though, have almost too little weird---they often write using fairly predictable sentence structures and idioms, because they are finding a voice. This makes their writing often very predictable, sometimes more so than AI generated work (because people have no internal maximum probability). Except new authors often trend towards too much detail (ex: "I have long ebony black hair (that’s how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee") instead of too little.
Also the grammar... it can be tough. AI really cleans up it's work, spelling and grammar wise, in a way that new authors may not bother with.
The really unfortunate thing is that not all work is 100% AI generated or 100% human created. Some work is AI generated and human edited, and some is human written and AI edited. The worst kind of AI fic experience (in my opinion) is when a fic starts out strong and then it becomes clear, chapter by chapter, that the author maybe started with having AI polish their work and is slowly relying on it to do more and more of the original 'writing'.
I also noticed once that a fic only had (likely) AI generated text in the action sequences.
For this issue, I think weird and what?? are more effective than the contextual methods, simply because the linguistic oddities are more difficult to prompt away (in the instructions fed to an AI) or edit out afterward. It's not uncommon to 'feed' an AI specific writing examples before a prompt in order to make the generated text sound more natural, but even with in those cases something about the text might read as "off".
For variable level, mixed AI/human work, it's both more of a guessing game and more a matter of preference. If you're comfortable with work that is probably AI generated but with an author that has carefully edited out any or most of the weird, what??, how many?, how?, when?, who?, and again?; that's your prerogative. If you're okay with never being quite sure if someone wrote this and ran through Grammarly or just has read a lot of AI generated text and sometimes falls into an "AI accent;" that's your feeling.
Personally I tend to just cut my losses and leave, because (as previously mentioned) I just don't like the writing style.
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Other tips:
- I tend to check the author's profile. Accounts with multiple very long fics in a short amount of time, or lots of short fics in a short amount of time, or with only one fic, or with very few to no fics before 2021 but way more in the time since (often with a big change in fic length and/or author voice); all of those get a strike (it takes multiple strikes to get blocked). As PeterLinderman mentioned, sometimes authors are importing their work from another site or uploading an extensive back catalog. Chapter upload dates can be changed manually, so it might be helpful to bookmark any still updating fics from a prolific author to track how much they add every day yourself.
- Another indicator may be if the fic is Anonymous (I know, glass houses) or not private. Filtering to just private works decreased the number of highly kudosed (highly likely) AI generated fics by at least half (in the top 100 results, unfortunately it also very much reduced the total number of results).
- Unfortunately content (explicit, etc) and form (social media au) are not great indicators. Generative AI can produce 'spicy' narrative text and, if not the Tweets, then at least the occasional irl moment in a Twitter fic (not sure on the Tweets, that's why this is about narrative AI text and not like, html AI text)
- The tags. Some AI fics have a metric ton of tags, ALL of which are official (Common). Why are you SEOing your AO3 fic? That's worth another strike.
- Unfortunately, reading too much AI generated text (just like reading too much of any one author's work) will give you a bit of an AI accent and make you increasingly AI blind. In times of need, I fall back on various old favorites to help me remember how human people sound.
My credentials for this matter are that I: a) read a lot (like a lot), b) have read a lot of fanfiction in particular (>10k bookmarks), and c) have done at least 8 hours of research into generative AI, LLMs, and identifying their output, not all of which was even for this guide! At this point I have something like an 82% success rate identifying likely AI generated text from just the description of a fic (the descriptions are usually also AI generated, whether as summaries or as excerpts from the text) and am haunted by portents of AI generated text everywhere I go.
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