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  1. Wow!
    I never thought that I'd read a Kagura/Inuyasha fanfic, but I just did, and I'm not sorry for it! :D
    This was amazingly detailed, and there was so much emotion that I felt so bad for Kagura and wanted nothing more than her and Inuyasha to end up together. Even though it was implied that she had a slight interest in Sesshomaru, I do think they look great together, and you did a perfect job keeping them in character. I'm just blown away by what I read... So much detail. xD I'm a bit envious of that, but so glad I stumbled upon this wonderful piece of writing!

    Although some women would be against the idea of 'sharing their man' I honestly find that so interesting. Why not? But I wonder how Kagome will take to this news... I really would love to read her perspective on this, as I think it would be one heck of a rollercoaster. I can see it now... her running home and crying, having a touching moment with her mom/friends, and then possibly returning to congratulate Inuyasha and Kagura. But the question is... what will happen once Naraku finds out?? :O

    I hope this will be continued, because it has so much potential. :D Wonderful job, once again!

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    1. Thank you, for reading and commenting in such detail and insight! I'm glad you liked it so much.

      Yes, Kagura x InuYasha is a pretty unusual pairing in this fandom, and there are relatively few interactions between these characters in the source material, but the ones that are there are fun to extrapolate from or riff on. Standouts in my mind are how InuYasha conveniently blasted off the upper half of Kagura's clothes using his Wind Scar attack, leaving her topless for the viewers/readers to enjoy (LOL). Or, more poignantly, how he expressed his willingness to help free her from Naraku, shortly before her death, as well as his regret for failing to save her, immediately after it.

      As for Naraku, arranging for the female characters in his orbit, or opposed to him in some way, to become pregnant, is a favorite, very evil trope of mine. It makes them, and the fathers of their children, very uniquely vulnerable to him, which I delight in building plot-lines around. Regarding his reaction to Kagura's pregnancy from InuYasha, I would definitely make him take advantage of the situation in some way.

      Truthfully, I don't have really immediate plans to continue this story, since I have better-developed, yet incomplete projects to finish, first. I may come back to this someday, though! We'll see...

      Thanks again!

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