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  1. Wow, you absolutely nailed all the group dynamics here. Cass' doomed quest to make AuDy learn tact actually got me to laugh at loud on multiple occasions, the Tower-Mako not-quite-exes thing came through so well, and of course Lazer Ted was there being Lazer Ted. I'm impressed at how well you fleshed out the AU in such a short period of time, too. At the same time, AuDy's inexplicable doomsday job not getting an explanation was fantastic. And the Mako-Larry backstory worked so well, right down to their shared emoji language. I could probably keep listing little jokes that made me laugh or minor points that had me feeling soft about the Chime for ages, but it is late and I should probably be asleep, so I will just say a general "I really enjoyed this" and hope that will do.

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